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StarPhoenix wrote:
Either we, or the environment, is being manipulated.
Should'n't that be "Either we, or the environment, are being manipulated" ? [Should I have put the question mark
with the quotations marks?

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You are correct - I deserve to be flogged for that. :shock: What an oversight!!!! *hangs head in shame*
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@Stuart: Hoist by my own petard.
JammiBear wrote:Telkom is a world class telecommunications company which values all it's customers and provides excellent customer service at competitive prices.
It's victimization in the media and amongst a few disgruntled consumers is completely unfounded, and this recent litigation is both frivolous and petty.
Correct me if I am wrong, but I do believe that the use of apostrophes in both instances of "it's" is inappropriate
and should be replaced by "its" on both counts.

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You are correct - with the apostrophe is means It is. The ownership form does not have one.
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Old schoolers would also argue for "victimisation" over "victimization."
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Only the Americans turn most "s"s into "z"s.
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It's actually becoming more widespread. When Stone-Ice starts doing it we know it's time to change.
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At least there are a few people here who feel as we do. That see the value in a properly constructed sentence.
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:facepalm:
I should have noticed that.

I have made sure that my work PC's copy of MS Word uses the UK ENglish dictionary. It picks up fewer "errors" that way, though it still insists that I begin each new line with a capital letter
and slaps me on the wrist for using the Passive Voice.
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Whata p01ntl355 thr3/\d...

:P

/wonder why no-one has posted while they are drunk in this thread yet...

*edit*

Shouldn't this be "SP's Grammar Nazi thread"? BY having this thread you are inviting the Grammar Nazis to invade and well know that is a bad thing.
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That is not a bad thing at all. Grammar Nazis play an important and vital role on the internet.
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:lol: I know just teasing the poor fellow ;). Maybe we should have a thread: "SMS Speak for the old" I could use that thread... :P

/alright I am leaving this thread now, my Engrish is not as good as rustys and hamins so I am leaving... :P
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Anakha56 wrote::lol: I know just teasing the poor fellow ;). Maybe we should have a thread: "SMS Speak for the old" I could use that thread... :P

/alright I am leaving this thread now, my Engrish is not as good as rustys and hamins so I am leaving... :P
I see what you did there.
You deliberately violated the English language, didn't you?
Tar and feathers, anyone?
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Tar smells too bad - syrup would be better.
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Tribble wrote:Tar smells too bad - syrup would be better.
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He had a feeling that this would appeal to you. Granted, I mentioned it without thinking of the probable outcome. Tar and feathering is not intended to be a pleasant experience. I shall have to rethink my suggestion.

(But feel free to take this idea to your lady friend ;-) )
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jamin_za wrote:
Anthro wrote:I am shocked at the illiteracy of some people working in the 'professional' world.
I always make exceptions for people who speak English as a second language.
There seems to be a bit of a double standard, especially with Afrikaans people as we expect them to be fully bi-lingual here in KZN, while we are a lot more tolerant of Zulu first language people...

I say if English is not your first language you are allowed to make a mess of it occasionally.

My tolerance is however limited to the spoken word.
When typing an email you have a spell checker which also polices your grammar, and if you are too lazy to use it to not look like an illiterate then I have little sympathy for you.
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Rule governing the insertion of commas between adjectives

I have it on good authority that injudicious use of the above can give what is written a lyrical tone.
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Soon Google will know everything...including how to divide by zero :(
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"Shall we eat Grandpa?"
or
"Shall we eat, Grandpa?"

I love commas :D
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Hey, SP, I have another site for you to proofread ...

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Right. English gurus, take your glasses out.

I've submitted a story onto a website, and I'm having a bit of a problem with one of the editors. They're saying that one of my lines is in the wrong tense.

I've highlighted the offending term in the quote in bold:
The laboratory was located deep within the Sahara desert, several miles underground. Although a private firm, they experimented and developed on all things supernatural. It proved surprisingly lucrative.

He inserted the capsule with clammy hands, waiting with bated breath. A pale sky-blue gas poured into the chamber on the other side. Breathing a sigh of relief, he wiped the sweat from his brow with a stained handkerchief. It was ready.

Pulling the capsule out, he walked to one of the computers and began to enter the data.

“Hey, Terry,” one of his colleagues said in a hushed voice. “Just to warn you, Requis is coming again.”

Terry gave a despaired groan. “Is he bringing any of his other Demon-Hunters?”

“No, not that I know of. Just him.”
The editor wants it to be changed into 'despairing' and for some reason, I just find it completely...incorrect.

Apparently the tense of the passage is progressive past (if that makes sense to you gurus).

Who's in the wrong? Me or the editor? (Keep in mind, the editor lives in Canada)
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Both are correct - so it comes down to a matter of preference. You could also say Terry groaned in despair, but he would probably have a problem with that too. To say groaned Terry, despairingly - is clumsy but correct. That is probably what he is looking for.
“Is he bringing any of his other Demon-Hunters?” groaned Terry, despairingly.
Or
Terry groaned in despair, “Is he bringing any of his other Demon-Hunters?”
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Question: Diaconate or deaconate?
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