Poetry: Show your stuff.....

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I am grinning from ear to ear. You may definitely use it. It speaks to me too. It never seems as though I am the author - just a watcher.
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Bwahahahahahaha
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Still VERY rough.....and emo.

This is obviously about trying to forget and dealing with unattainable ideals

Let me forget you
Turn from the thought of you
Fade from memory
Never return

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I like - you should continue it
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The Final Harmony - Prelude to World's End

I weave a tale of many faces,
I live a day darker than night,
I sing a song with many aces.
Will you listen to my plight?
A thousand ages gone from memory,
Wars fought, countless gone,
No words describe deeds I’ve done.
I bring about the final harmony.


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I'm busy finishing up a story titled World's End, and this is the opening paragraph to the entire thing.
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Very nice darkstar - makes me want to read more
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