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Psych0_Cr1tt3r wrote:
Evade wrote:omg, dnt ppl post here any more?????
advice plz....
Advice on...?

The three symbol designs, snazzy as they might be, are too subjective to critique unless they have some sort of applied function.

We can't critique the characters on the conceptual side because they fall under the label of fanart. We can't critique on the formal elements such as anatomy, lighting, composition, line, tone or style because they were copied. We can't really critique on accuracy and mark making quality because that improves only with practice.

So what do you want us to say?
that answer was gr8, now i no where i stand :)
though i dnt get wat u meant bout my crossess..... but they random pics i drew for fun.....
so, shot mate
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Post by Psych0_Cr1tt3r »

So accidentally I was helpful, by accident.

What I mean with the crosses is that I find them impressive. You asked for advice but what can we say? If the elements used in them are symbolic of something then they work. An advertisement, logo, signage, page layout or some other form of graphic design is easier to give advice on because they have a set function and hench limitations.

As symbols they work, so I don't really have anything to say.
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as a matter of interest crttr... (i miss the toaster :( )
http://www.blueabyss.com/
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jee wrote:as a matter of interest crttr... (i miss the toaster :( )
http://www.blueabyss.com/
Good stuff. I'll bookmark it, I'll bookmark it REAL good.

Ka-pow!

As a matter of interest I forgot about toaster.


http://www.stevenegordon.com/

Steve Gordon! Although I think most of his digital colour works sucks balls his lineart is pretty pimp. I keep grabbing at my sketch book while looking at it. Very inspirational. The action poses of Nightcrawler most of all.
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Evade wrote:omg, dnt ppl post here any more?????
advice plz....
yeah, i'm guessing that comp wont be held anymore too?
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@Jdoa: yeah mate, got no idea....
gretel appears 2 hav disappeared ....

how ur scetches/drawings cum'n on dude?
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Post by Psych0_Cr1tt3r »

Jdoa wrote:
Evade wrote:omg, dnt ppl post here any more?????
advice plz....
yeah, i'm guessing that comp wont be held anymore too?
Chin up, soldier. On another forum I browse there are multiple threads with the same idea (but the users vote, no judges, and the winner chooses the next subject). It's an effective way to improve because the subject matter isn't always all that easy and it's a fun community building exercise.

So...

Perhaps someone should take over the whole deal: Create a new thread, set a deadline, etc. Things never get done when there's no deadline. And if it were a weekly (or every two weeks or whatever) thing then it would build interest, instead of waiting for people to care.

I feel like going for it, but I'll have to sleep on it to see if I still feel like going for it tomorrow. Procrastination!


In the meantime lookit this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s7sAa4awJRw&NR
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y3_ja_biTl4

Note how he draws big and makes long strokes. Darkstar, if you're still around, take notes.
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Post by Kovu »

@ Evade could you please bring some of pics to Tech?
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Post by GrEteL_GrAy »

yesh..im alive

i did not die!

i coulnt log on... O_O

soo YAY!

I LIVE!!!

if anybody knows meh -_-

anyway, some pics i guess...

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for now XD

YAY!!! I LIVE!
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@ GrEteL_GrAy Do you draw on request? I have something specific I want. I have been looking for someone to draw and refine something (if I dont like original) for me. I am willing to pay, as long as you can give an estimate of how long it will take etc etc etc. It would have to be via PM, as it would be for a greyscale tattoo, and I dont want images etc being public. It would be fully 100% my original (or your interpretation of my words). Would you be willing to quote me if I give you a spec?
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Post by GrEteL_GrAy »

the fact that joo have the burning pesants as joor avy, and this tels mr joo know trogdor, im willing to listen wot joo have to say XD

send me a PM to tell me what joo have in mind, and ill consider it :D
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Niiiice!
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Post by GrEteL_GrAy »

thank joo! 8) 8) 8) 8)
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Post by Sagariouz »

Omw, what a nice supprise. Didn't think of seeing you around again :P

But your new work is awesome girl, it is easy to see that you got a lot of experience during the few years you where gone. Kudos.

Come and visit again, kapish? The art side of the forum needs to be resurrected.
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Nice, thank you :) Trogdor Strikes again ;)

I will try to articulate what I want to the best of my ability. As soon as I get time on the weekend I will PM you with what I am looking for. Thanks for being willing to listen :)
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Goodness me Gretel, that is just sooooo awesome!!
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Post by GrEteL_GrAy »

wik1d!!! i know joo XD :D

thank jooo!
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GrEteL_GrAy wrote:wik1d!!! i know joo XD :D

thank jooo!
Haha! Some of us still live! :D

How's it going with Kartyn?
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Post by GrEteL_GrAy »

good good!

we all die in matrik, but we shall live!

im soo glad i still know some of joo!!

was i missed? XD
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GrEteL_GrAy wrote:was i missed? XD
Ofcourse :D
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Post by Off-The-Chart »

yeah we missed the real creative artists around here...

we had to settle for us n00b copy cats... :(
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Post by GrEteL_GrAy »

oh noes!! O_O

is it ok if i still post my art in my tread? XD

heres some IDs i made for my deviantart acount :twisted: :twisted:

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and just stuff: 8) 8) 8)
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Post by ZeroS »

You wouldn't happen to know Maleko?
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Post by GrEteL_GrAy »

nani?

on deviant art?

im afraid not :oops:
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Post by ZeroS »

Maleko is also a local artist and is into anime as well. Maleko charges for custom works.
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